Date: 2022-01-10 12:30 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bonda
omg i love this concept and i love how the rule63 switched around so at times yeonj was the girl and other times soob was the girl....i also REALLY love how ambiguous their relationship looks to outsiders. i really enjoyed being limited to only what the other characters know, being only able to evaluate what those characters view as important....this is so creative and well done, imo. i think my favorite vignette is C, esp bc that last line HITS SO MUCH. smth about how matter of fact it is and how it calls back to the opening i do love a circular story and a chekovs gun type story. B is also good tew me becausee of the throughline of the "possibility of soobin taking her on a date" line because i also love repetitions with slight changes reflecting the realizations of the character....overall this was rly good i enjoyed the read ^_^ thank u for sharing <3
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